В случае, если мои посты еще кто-то читает, и если этот кто-то знает английский получше меня: я прошу проверить грамотность написанного ниже))
Если мои посты уже никто не читает, то на грамотность можно и забить
В обсчем, мой первый, более-менее связный, стих на английском.
Прошу лупить и жаловаться.
Cause I saw blue-eyed guy,
I want make him happy.
His glass eyes are always dry
Though he is forever sappy
He know all of my holes
He changes my sodden nappies
Cause I saw he made mess
I NEED MAKE HIM HAPPY
NOW
It's so fun to lose
It's so fun to lose
It's so fun to lose
Cruelty so suits you
Cause I saw blue-eyed guy,
I want make him happy.
His smile is only try
Don't look like solitary.
It's brutal innocence
He can become an yappie.
Cause I saw he made mess
I NEED MAKE IT HAPPY
NOW
It's so fun to lose
It's so fun to lose
It's so fun to lose
Him...
Though I saw blue-eyed guy,
And want make him happy,
He will not tell me why
so wild and foolhardy
It's brutal innocence
He know all of my patсhes
I saw he made fine mess
I NEED MAKE HIM HAPPY